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<edit>By procrastinating my 1000 word essay i havent started on, due in three days, i have tried my best to edit a few things according to the crit i received [8D;;] Okay okay okay... I AM studying for real now.. orz;;</edit>

W-w-w...what am i doing while i have all this homework?... orz

Mixed around with Photoshop and Sai this time//<3 The brushes are really smooth~. This is the first picture that's completed with sai, that's not a speedpaint. [but then again, the bg is practically speedpainted OTL]

It was originally Miku fanart-some-what-inspired by Makoto Shinkai;; A bit messy, and not a detailed as i planned it to be, but i think it turned out okay since i am a pink-tard [:'DDDD]

btw, i always re-use the same dress design in my pictures for some reason OTL

SPEAKING OF SPRING. THE SPRING ANIME TIMETABLE SUCKS. I was sooo looking forward to Pandora Hearts, Tayutama and Higurashi three, but they are all so-so. I looked around and my watch list is only around 5 series; [which is small to the usual 10]

K-on, Hetalia and Eden of the East are win though.
I miss jigoku shoujo.. and, and.. NATSUMEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE [;_;]

I will study for real this week, so I'm taking a hiatus until things clear up;

and I will get though those who wanted a visit eventually --!!.

Critiques


:iconnyiana-sama:
This is such a beautiful deviation, there are so many wonderful things about it. First off, I love how the girls dress contrasts the background. It makes her stand out a lot and it is very adorable. The details that you have put into this deviation is outstanding and she looks like she's out for a stroll on a Saturday afternoon.

One thing that I've noticed is that her hair and eye color blend in a lot with the background, and it doesn't draw my eyes directly to her face. If her hair color was a little darker, then she would stand out a more against the background. Other than the hair and eye colors, she stands out very well.

This deviation flows really nicely and is so adorable to look at. I love it. The details in the background are amazing and the individual colored cherry blossoms is spectacular. One thing that I noticed, is the fence object in the left corner it doesn't looks like it has any definitive lines. Maybe if there were a few darker colors like some grays then it would more like a metal type fence.

All in all, this is a wonderful deviation that I love a lot. The character is simply adorable and the background is incredible. Keep up the amazing work.
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41 out of 50 deviants thought this was fair.

:iconbrandyrosa:
With the airy perspective, it looks as if it is late afternoon with wind blowing away the dust from the road and making pink petals dance with a ripple. You put a great detail on this, for example inflating dress and flowing hair enhance the impression of the motion. Not only her facal expression, but the whole body shows happiness, like she is walking in a dancing manner. The petals might be falling from threes, but she might has just threw away a bunch from the basket in spectator's direction as well.

The leg might seem slightly too thick, maybe shadow on the calf would fix it, but you can leave it like this. Also I noticed the limbs are more cylindric than in your previous pieces so they look better.

I'm sorry for language mistakes, and if some words look weird in juxtaposition OTL
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:icontajii-chan:
Wow~ I love the way you did the blossoms! ^-^ They really look beautiful~! :heart:

The whole picture is just so beautiful~! >w<

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:heart: Colors make the world go 'round~! ^o^ :heart:
:icondiaboso:
the coloring on this is just so detailed and gorgeous :love:

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This is such fun. i have inadvertently distracted you from the important message above. So if you read this just remember I have just wasted a few seconds of your life that you will never get back.
:iconakirakirai:
namie<333 the cherry blossoms look so pretty! I love how you color so muchhhh
her dress is so cute

don't stress yourself out with studying! <3
:iconliliannoel:
woooow this color and this girl and details... it is so beautfulll....i love iz.:-*
:iconteddy-b-bair:
thats so cut i love ur art♥

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HEHEHE -^.^-
I love ya gyes!!! :mangapunksai:
:iconsyndicth:
kawaii!!!You make me desire a collab :XD:

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:iconbianchina:
It's lovely :heart: The colours are AMAZING *A*

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"Experience is what you get when you don't get what you wanted."

Wanna see something real cute? X3 :heart: [link]
:iconarthur-on-ikarisa:
how do you color the leaves and the background? it just such an awesomeness :glomp:

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I am proud to be ~indonesia and ~TYPE-MOON
no nothing heart

all hail Mujun Rasen~!! (scored 10 from 10 ;) )
:iconketoera:
Beautifull colours. They really pop out os the picure since you didn't use lines everywhere.

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Peace on Earth
Earth on Peace.
:iconkareginomoto:
simply beautiful O///O the lights and the shades are so well don that the look so real ! :clap:

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:rose:“even the most beautiful flower can grow in hell”:rose:

make me happy , you'll be happy - make me mad and you're going to DIE !

愛してる =Kaoxita :blushes: :heart:

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